Carol Shields Prize Longlist: A Council of Dolls by Mona Susan Power

my doll is a collector of tragedy … the device I use to hide from something I already know

Mona Susan Power’s fourth novel, A Council of Dolls, is an Indigenous saga that draws on her own family history. Through first-person narratives by three generations of Dakhóta and Lakhóta women, she explores the ongoing effects of trauma resulting from colonialist oppression. The journey into the past begins with Sissy, a little girl in racist 1960s Chicago with an angry, physically abusive mother, Lillian. This section sets up the book’s pattern of ascribing voice and agency to characters’ dolls. Specifically, Sissy dissociates from her own emotions and upsetting experiences by putting them onto Ethel, her Black doll. Power relies on the dramatic irony between Sissy’s childhood perspective and readers’ understanding.

Moving backward: In 1930s North Dakota, we see Lillian coping with her father’s alcohol-fuelled violence by pretending she is being directed in a play. She loses her Shirley Temple doll, Mae, in an act of charity towards a sickly girl in the community. Lillian and her sister, Blanche, attend an Indian school in Bismarck. Run by nuns, it’s even crueller than the institution their parents, Cora and Jack, attended: the infamous Carlisle Indian Industrial School in Pennsylvania (also a setting in Wandering Stars by Tommy Orange). Cora’s beautifully introspective journal from the 1910s reveals the systematic cultural annihilation that took place there. Her doll, Winona, rescued from a massacre in the time of Sitting Bull, was on the pyre of precious belongings – tribal costumes, instruments, medals, sacred feathers ­– burned on students’ arrival. But her stone heart survives as a totem of resilience.

This is a powerful but harrowing story. The characterization and narration are strong, and the nesting-dolls structure means we get glimpses into the future for all three protagonists. However, I was disappointed by a number of Power’s decisions. It appeared that a fourth and final narrator close to the present day would introduce another aspect, but in fact Jesse is a new name that Sissy chose for herself. Now a 50-year-old academic and writer, she becomes a medium for the dolls’ accounts – but this ends up repeating material we’d already encountered. The personification of familial tragedy in the figure of “the injured woman” who appears to Cora verges on mawkish, and the touches of magic realism to do with the dolls sit uneasily beside clinical discussions of trauma. In Jesse’s section, there is something unsubtle about how this forms the basis of a conversation between her and her friend Izzy:

(Jesse thinks) “I wanted that chance to break the chain of passing on harmful inner scripts, the self-loathing that comes from brutally effective colonization.”

(Izzy says) “whoo, that’s a big fat pipe full of misery … Our people have been pathologized from the very beginning. Still are.”

It’s possible I would have responded to this with more enthusiasm had it been packaged as a family memoir. As it is, I was unsure about the hybridization of autofiction and magic realism and wondered what white readers coming to the novel should conclude. I kept in mind Elaine Castillo’s essay “How to Read Now,” about her sense of BIPOC writers’ job: “if our stories primarily serve to educate, console and productively scold a comfortable white readership, then those stories will have failed their readers”. Perhaps Power’s novel was not primarily intended to serve in that way.

I’ll let her have the last word, via the Author’s Note: “outrageously prejudiced depictions of my ancestors and our people are one reason I became a writer. From childhood I felt an urgent need to speak my truth, which was long suppressed. Writing this book was a healing endeavor. May it support the healing of others.”

With thanks to publicist Nicole Magas and Mariner Books for the free e-copy for review.

 

This was a buddy read with Laura; see her review here.

 

Before the shortlist is announced on 9 April, I plan to review my two current reads, Cocktail by Lisa Alward and Land of Milk and Honey by C Pam Zhang, and concoct a personal wish list.

11 responses

  1. […] read this as a buddy read with Bookish Beck. Rebecca’s review is here. Thanks so much to Nicole Magas at Zgstories for sourcing a free e-ARC from the publisher for […]

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  2. Laura's avatar

    I was glad we heard from adult-Jesse because I wanted the violence in her child-self’s storyline to be addressed, but I agree that there were some big missteps in that section. I liked the injured woman, though!

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    1. Rebecca Foster's avatar

      Did you? I thought it was too obvious a symbol. I can’t pinpoint what makes magic realism work for me, or not, in a book. I think I’m more likely to tolerate it in short stories.

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      1. Laura's avatar

        I mean, it was obvious but I think the graphic horror of it moved it away from being too sentimental for me.

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  3. whatmeread's avatar

    I’m not big on magical realism, myself.

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    1. Rebecca Foster's avatar

      It’s hit and miss for me.

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  4. Laila@BigReadingLife's avatar

    I still might give this one a try. Gotta steel myself for it, though.

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    1. Rebecca Foster's avatar

      Yes, it’s a tough read.

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  5. Marcie McCauley's avatar

    Like you, I was expecting a fourth character in the final section but, as Laura mentioned, I did want another perspective on the way that Sissy’s section ended too, so I wasn’t entirely disappointed. It also did tie together in a circular way, which I appreciated, but there’s no room for the younger generations there either (and that’s not her story, so fair enough, as you’ve said). I really liked the dolls’ voices and what they offered to the story. Sometimes they made me chuckle, which I appreciated, in a very serious story. I agree that some of the language feels openly instructive, but I imagine, if you’ve spent your whole life feeling like you can’t discuss systemic injustice, that the need to made bold statements has a different resonance and iimportance. And maybe she is writing more for other Indigenous women than for anyone else really. (When Jesse’s section begins, she’s looking for a book by Lee Maracle online, and that quality is pervasive in Maracle’s work too.) So I think the way you’ve concluded your review is perfect.

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  6. […] It (c. 1950).”) The inherited trauma is clear, yet I never found the content as bleak here as in A Council of Dolls; Foote weaves in enough counterbalancing lightness and love. There are so many strong female […]

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  7. […] in Mexico. I thought that Tattoo would turn out to be Julia’s childhood doll Yatzi (similar to in A Council of Dolls by Mona Susan Power, where dolls have sentimental and magical power across the centuries), but the […]

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