“The Possibilities of Place” Webinar with Nina Mingya Powles

Yesterday was National Nonfiction Day in the UK, apparently, as well as being part of the ongoing Nonfiction November challenge. Appropriately, I attended what I think must be my first writing workshop, run online by The Emma Press, a Birmingham-based publisher whose poetry and essay collections I enjoy. Thanks to Arts Council England funding, they’ve been able to arrange a series of masterclass webinars that explore some of the genres they publish.

The life writing class I participated in was led by Nina Mingya Powles, a poet and essayist whose terrific books Magnolia, Small Bodies of Water, and Tiny Moons (The Emma Press’s best-selling memoir) I’ve read and reviewed. Other attendees hailed from as far afield as Orkney, West Cork, the South of France, Berlin and New Zealand. The seminar was in Zoom presenter mode, so only Nina was on screen and the rest of us communicated via the chat box. I had been nervous about joining from my PC without a webcam or microphone, so I was relieved that this was the setup.

Nina spoke about how broad the umbrella of “life writing” is, potentially incorporating poetry and autofiction as well as straightforward prose. “Creative nonfiction” is a term sometimes used interchangeably with it. Today she wanted to focus on how memories (especially childhood memories), food and place are intertwined.

For our first warm-up exercise, she had us draw a rough map of a body of water and put a point on it, then write ourselves into that place. During this 7-minute freewrite, I compiled a list of not particularly poetic sense impressions of Annapolis harbour. I found myself crying as I realized I might never have a reason to go back to a place that was so important in my teen and early adult years.

Nina’s black-and-white cat, Otto, often butted in, in amusing and feline-appropriate ways. We proceeded to consider food as a portal to memories and to different places we’ve lived or travelled. Nina likes to think about being an outsider and the visitor’s perspective. She acknowledged that our relationships with food can be complicated, so sometimes it is a loaded topic. Mostly she is looking for gentle, tender, joyful depictions of food.

She read aloud Rebecca May Johnson’s recipe poem “to purge the desire to write like a man,” which on one level is about making tomato sauce (as is Small Fires) but ends with a “found incantation” from Natalia Ginzburg that reclaims the female realm of the kitchen as a place of power. I loved how the first stanzas describe the body as an archive, containing multitudes. Then we considered a Jennifer Wong poem, “A personal history of soups,” about all the Chinese soups she loves and misses, and their personal and legendary meanings.

Taking the Wong title as our prompt, we spent 15 minutes writing a rough piece about a foodstuff. I’ve reproduced mine below, without any tidying-up. I mimicked the part-recipe format of the Johnson and tried to picture the kitchen of our first Bowie house and the cookware we had there.

 


A personal history of apple pie

As American as…

Dad did all the cooking when I was growing up, so for my mother to accompany me in the kitchen was a big thing. One year of my adolescence, there was a baking contest at the church my best friend and her family attended. I didn’t expect to take part at all or, if anything, perhaps I assumed I’d knock together some simple chocolate chip cookies on my own. But Mom insisted we would make an apple pie from scratch together – crust and all.

An apron each. One green, one red. Hand-embroidered heirlooms made by her grandmother. (Don’t keep them folded away in a drawer. Use them. They are your lineage, your artefacts.)

Half shortening, half butter. Glass bowl. Cold water. Half-moon cutter criss-crosses through chunks of semi-solid fat to render them smaller and smaller, flour-covered pebbles the size of peas.

Scent clouds of cinnamon and cloves billow up from a pan of stewing apples. A ceramic dish with crimping around the rim. A wooden rolling pin to achieve a uniform one-quarter inch round of dough. Freshly washed fingers gently pressing divots into the sides until every air bubble disappears.

Blind bake the crust. Trust that it will hold your creation. The sizzle of softened fruit in contact with the part-baked crust.

I have no memory of whether we won a prize. And me so competitive! The prize was the time. The prize was the attention. The assurance that this was worth it, that I was worth it.


 

Next we moved on to think about place and journeys, especially departures and arrivals – bringing places with us versus leaving them behind. An attendee commented, and Nina agreed, that often distance is useful: we can most easily write about somewhere after we’ve left it, once there is a sense of yearning. For this section we looked at a few-page extract from Larissa Pham’s essay collection Pop Song in which she describes a drive from Albuquerque to Taos. Expecting beautiful Georgia O’Keeffe-type scenery, she experiences the letdown of signs of the opioid crisis and Trump voters.

Borrowing a line from the Pham essay, Nina invited us to spend 20 minutes writing a piece that would bring the reader into the immediacy of our experience of a place. She reminded us, as a general rule, to remember to cite whatever we borrow, or to remove the borrowed line afterwards and see if it still works. My take on “Here I was now in the distant place…” ended up being a few rambling paragraphs contrasting my two study abroad years, one magical and one difficult. (Sample line: “Everything in England was like that: partially familiar but slightly askew.”)

At the end, three participants unmuted themselves and read their food pieces aloud. One was about food and a mother’s love; milk and rice. The other two, amusingly, were both about meringue: making a cherry meringue pie with a Scottish granny, and assembling pavlovas with aunts in New Zealand.

Nina encouraged us to think of life writing as a fluid thing, including journaling, blogging, travel and nature writing. This was heartening because I’ve always indulged in bits of autobiographical writing on my blog, and I started a journal last month as my 40th birthday approached, inspired in part by the 150 journals I inherited from my mother as well as by the desires to document my life and believe that the day-to-day has meaning.

The two-hour workshop was incredibly good value, especially considering that The Emma Press sent a voucher for £4 off of one of their books. (I’ve ordered their poetry anthology on ageing.) Nina also generously circulated lists of additional writing prompts, magazines that accept life writing submissions, and relevant competitions to enter.

I’d purchased a ticket on a whim but wasn’t sure whether I’d participate fully – I have a bad habit of skipping the exercises in books, after all. I’m so glad I did join, and gave myself over to the writing prompts. Who knows if anything will come of it, but it was cathartic to think about life experiences I don’t often have at the forefront of my mind, and to see how much can be produced in short periods of concerted writing.

19 responses

  1. Marina Sofia's avatar

    I love The Emma Press and this sounds like such a rich webinar, leading to much self-reflection and creative impulses. I wish I could have attended, but was working… 😫😫

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    1. Rebecca Foster's avatar

      I’m lucky to have such a flexible schedule as a working-from-home freelancer. I imagine most of the other attendees were ladies of a certain age (i.e., retired).

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  2. margaret21's avatar

    Rebecca, this sounds a wonderful experience indeed. And I so much enjoyed the piece you shared. Perhaps you should consider branching out beyond book reviewing ( with sa bit of biographical input)? I’d read your work if it was ‘out there’. I’d be interested to hear how you find the experience of writing your journal, once it’s become embedded in your daily practice.

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    1. Rebecca Foster's avatar

      Thank you! I do have a secret ambition to publish, likely something in the family memoir vein. I’m not yet a daily journal writer. I keep ending up in a situation where I am behind and have to catch up on a week or so, which is not ideal. I’ll have to figure out how to get into better habits about it. I might see if I can make a template based on my mother’s usual entries. Either that or adopt the prompts I’ve seen that Molly Wizenberg uses (more of a gratitude journal, that).

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      1. margaret21's avatar

        You’ll figure it out. It’s meant to be a pleasure, not a duty, and you’ll find a way.

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  3. Elle's avatar

    This sounds really good! The prompts are wonderful and your apple pie piece is lovely, really moving. I might do a few of these! (Can highly recommend journaling if you can stick to it. I was an obsessive journaler as a child/teen/early 20s person, but lost the habit at around 25. Am trying to pick it up again and struggling.)

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    1. Rebecca Foster's avatar

      Thank you. The last time I kept a journal was when I was 14-15. I’m sure that would be amusing to reread, but not particularly enlightening! Living across countries and cultures is something we share and I’m sure would inform our writing.

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  4. Laura's avatar

    What a lovely baking memory! I think I’ve done a similar exercise in a writing workshop – I was surprised by how incredibly evocative just writing down a few lines about the smells of my grandparents’ old house (The Rayburn. Meg’s [collie dog] smell. The pan hissing with stock in it. The washing blowing in the wind. Sweet peas. Salt from the sea.) I enjoyed Small Bodies of Water and would like to read Tiny Moons.

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    1. Rebecca Foster's avatar

      Thank you! It was interesting to see what came out during what was essentially an automatic writing exercise. Sense memories can be so powerful. Tiny Moons is a lovely little book.

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  5. Laila@BigReadingLife's avatar

    What a cool thing to participate in. Good for you! I loved your own writing sample – especially the lines “the prize was the time. the prize was the attention.” Lovely.

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  6. Rebecca Moon Ruark's avatar

    This sounds like it was a wonderful workshop! I love your writing sample about the pie–“trust that it will hold your creation” is great–and I’m imagining you writing of places I also know well: Bowie and Annapolis. Thank you for sharing this!

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    1. Rebecca Foster's avatar

      Thank you. Bowie would definitely be key in any longer autobiographical writing project of mine.

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      1. Rebecca Moon Ruark's avatar

        I look forward to whatever comes next!

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      2. Rebecca Foster's avatar

        That’s really sweet of you to say 🙂 Sometimes I wonder who could possibly find a suburban Maryland upbringing interesting, but everyone has to come from somewhere…

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  7. Marcie McCauley's avatar

    What an amazing experience. I’ve been wondering when you might try something like this and I love what I’ve read so far. You can count me into the group of commenters who are ambivalent about journalling, having been loyal and dedicated at times and wholly neglectful in other times.

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    1. Rebecca Foster's avatar

      Thank you! I think to need to create some rituals around journaling so that it becomes second nature and enjoyable rather than a chore. At the moment my strategy is to leave it out with a pen on the dining table so I can pick it up whenever I’m passing and jot a few lines. That has worked to an extent.

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  8. Liz Dexter's avatar

    I loved your piece and thank you for sharing this experience with us. I really rate Emma Press and review their books sometimes (I had to turn down a couple that were a bit close to the bone recently but they’re always so kind and understanding!). They’re always so innovative.

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    1. Rebecca Foster's avatar

      I also appreciate the work they do, especially how inclusive their anthologies are and how welcoming they seem to be to new writers.

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