#NovNov23 and #SciFiMonth: They by Kay Dick

To join the Week 3 theme of Novellas in November, “Broadening My Horizons,” with Science Fiction Month (celebrating a genre I still struggle with but occasionally enjoy), I decided to pick up a short rediscovered dystopian classic. Originally published in 1977, They: A Sequence of Unease was reissued by Faber Editions last year. I had never heard of its author, Kay Dick (1915–2001), a lesbian bookseller and publisher who lived in London and Brighton and wrote seven works of fiction and three biographies.

Although I can think of a few dystopian novels that I have loved, it’s not a mode I gravitate towards. This makes me out of step with the zeitgeist, I know, because dystopian stories are only rising in popularity as current events converge with premonitory visions of the future.

The specific problem I had with They is one I’ve had with some other speculative works: vagueness. I can’t stand it when allegorical books are set in a deliberate no-place, or a made-up country (I’ve not yet succeeded in reading a J.M. Coetzee or José Saramago novel, for instance). I gave up on the Giller Prize-winning Study for Obedience when its first ten pages gave no clear sense of its geographical or temporal setting. When there’s no detail to latch onto, disorientation usually leads me to turn to another more realist book in preference.

They is, in fact, set in an ironically idyllic Britain. There are lovely descriptions of the land during different seasons: roses, sunsets, wheat fields, birdsong. This is in contrast with the disquiet permeating the narrator’s everyday life. She is part of a dispersed, itinerant creative community whose members come and go, hiding their work and doing their best to avoid the nameless enforcers who patrol the country to destroy art and quash emotion and individual endeavours. Certain artists of her acquaintance have been maimed or disappeared. For all the public enshrinement of teamwork, the normies the book portrays seem purely mean-spirited: children torture animals for kicks.

A case could be made that Dick was aiming at universality – this could happen anywhere – but the combination of imprecision and flat, declarative sentences left me cold.

“We’re all frightened. We must live with it. Russell and Jane will be here tomorrow. They got through London. I’ll be sleeping in the room opposite yours tonight. You are over-tired; it’s the strain.”

“Subscribing to current social fashions, I gave a small party, inviting all my neighbours. They all talked at the same time. No one listened to anyone else. No one laughed. Only Tim and I smiled at each other. They felt uneasy because there was no television set.”

In terms of world-building, everything is either unexplained or revealed abruptly through unsubtle dialogue. I came away with no sense of the narrator or any of the many secondary characters, who are little more than a name. Funny that the most consistent presence is that of her dog, who is never given the dignity of a name. (It’s only ever “my dog,” when a creature so important to her would surely be referred to as a friend.) While the two authors were probably poles apart ideologically, I thought I spied the ghost of Ayn Rand in the awe surrounding individual achievement.

It’s comforting to try to believe what Hurst says about the persistence of art – “We can all add to the treasure, however short the time left may be. It can’t all be destroyed. Some of it will remain for those who come after us” – but this portrait of underground artists in a parallel modern Britain failed to move me. (New purchase at sale price from Faber website) [107 pages]

22 responses

  1. Annabel (AnnaBookBel)'s avatar

    Like you, I’m not good with vagueness in novels, but I rather liked They when I read it last year. The dystopian theme and rising unease was enough to enjoy it.

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    1. Rebecca Foster's avatar

      You’re better at SF in general than I am. Oddly, I think I might have preferred this at double the length or more, to have time to flesh out the characters and incidents.

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  2. whatmeread's avatar

    Doesn’t sound like it’s for me.

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    1. Rebecca Foster's avatar

      Not for me either, alas. A rare 1* rating for me.

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  3. Nic's avatar

    Thanks, sounds like this one isn’t for me. That style of writing alone would put me off

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    1. Rebecca Foster's avatar

      I wondered if she was imitating Samuel Beckett, especially with some of the dialogue.

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  4. Laila@BigReadingLife's avatar

    I struggle with deliberate no-places too. I’m not really a fan of dystopian fiction either (with the exception of Station Eleven.) I have to be careful about it because it freaks me out too much!

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    1. Rebecca Foster's avatar

      Emily St. John Mandel is a definite exception for me when it comes to SF!

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  5. lauratfrey's avatar

    Having just read two very vague books (Study for Obedience, and Greek Lessons), which I loved, I can say that the only way books like that work for me is if they have something more than an obvious message to convey – this sounds very “art is good” which…. yeah, we know. Hopefully I will get motivated to review them, maybe together since they both deal with loss of language…

    And yikes to the Ayn Rand parallel!

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    1. Rebecca Foster's avatar

      You’re on brand after Study for Obedience’s Giller win!

      NovNov would be the perfect time to review both of those 🙂

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  6. margaret21's avatar

    Well done for giving attention to dystopian and science fiction, genres . I struggle too. But with so many more appetising books waiting to be read, I don’t actually try very hard.

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    1. Rebecca Foster's avatar

      I have a few trusted authors who edge into SFF, but it takes a strong recommendation for me to try others that are new to me.

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  7. Laura's avatar

    Ah, I hate vagueness in spec fic too! It’s just not what the genre should be about!

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    1. Rebecca Foster's avatar

      I was disappointed not to enjoy this one, as it’s always fun to rediscover forgotten authors.

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  8. This Reading Life's avatar

    I just posted about They today too. But I enjoyed it a lot more than you did – loving it for the very things that bugged you (ie the vagueness) – that’s what makes reading such a wonderful thing though – it appeals to us for different reasons, at different times 🙂

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    1. Rebecca Foster's avatar

      What a coincidence! And yes, I can see how the vagueness/universality would work for others. It looks like we both appreciated the landscape descriptions, however.

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      1. This Reading Life's avatar

        That final chapter in the rose garden in particular! I could almost smell them and hear the bees.

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  9. Cathy746books's avatar

    I read this a while back and I liked it a lot but the reservations I had were the same as your own. It felt very much like disconnected scenes to me rather than a coherant narrative.

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    1. Rebecca Foster's avatar

      Interesting that you say that — Carmen Maria Machado pointed out in her introduction that one of the chapters was released as a stand-alone story, so it may be that the book was constructed piecemeal.

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  10. MarketGardenReader/IntegratedExpat's avatar

    That dialogue sounds like an early reader. Dick and Jane, or the series I learned from, Peter and Jane. In which case, it’s Pat the dog, tee hee. The original 1977 edition of They had 94 pages. The Faber & Faber edition is 107. Just how long is that introduction?

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    1. Rebecca Foster's avatar

      I wonder if she was going for Beckettian speech … but ended up with more of a primer, as you say! (A few comments on this post fell foul of my spam blocker for having the word “dick” in! Not helpful when that was the author’s surname.) The introduction was 5-10 pages, as I recall. Different margins and font size, I suppose.

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